Writing THIS is the "comment" thread for "The Story of a philosopher/incel/wanderer"

Lordgoro

IN THE ZONE
FOR those BRAVE brothers who have TAKEN the plunge and actually READ my work upto the latest chapter, I SERIOUSLY need opinions, as many as possible... On style, humor, entertainment value, content, and whether its good, mediocre, lousy, or if it really grabs you as readers? I need some opinions before I can really continue?
 

Lordgoro

IN THE ZONE
BUMP!! I need OPINIONS before I can continue, im serious.. And ill have to keep bumping I guess til I get feedback..
 

Lordgoro

IN THE ZONE
Thanks... But looking for opinions on content, style, humor, does it hook you, or bore? I listen to all opinions of brothers that have read my work.
 

Lordgoro

IN THE ZONE
Just got a retаrded opinion from an ignorant normie with a short attention span.. Claimed he "tried" to read a "page or two", then all he said was GOOD LUCK!! Its still my opinion that the vast majority of "normies" in our modern society have zero interest in either my type of story NOR my unique style and voice of writing. SO sadly, even after it gets finished someday, the normie world will never read it...
 

OysterSauce

Sodomy enthusiast,foreskin reattachment specialist
Thanks... But looking for opinions on content, style, humor, does it hook you, or bore? I listen to all opinions of brothers that have read my work.
Well, I've read all of it so far, just finished, and it has certainly hooked me. A good read. I like the writing style. Can't really come up with any complaints, now that I think about it.
 

Lordgoro

IN THE ZONE
Lordgoro said:
Thanks... But looking for opinions on content, style, humor, does it hook you, or bore? I listen to all opinions of brothers that have read my work.
Well, I've read all of it so far, just finished, and it has certainly hooked me. A good read. I like the writing style. Can't really come up with any complaints, now that I think about it.
In that case, ill consider it a SUCCESS so far... Just heard from another "normie" reader today, claimed he read only 2 chapters and complained thats its "self-absorbed"... Well that shows the average mindset of normies.. Its a FRIGGING AUTOBIOGRAPHY!! Of COURSE its self-absorbed!! Its ALL about MY life, and the strange freaky events that ive survived, so its gonna be ABOUT ME! Not about palace intrigue in Moscow, or the romantic life of the average chad, its about me, and the strange folks ive happened to run across... I guess this normie missed the part about it being an AUTOBIOGRAPHY hmm?
 

OysterSauce

Sodomy enthusiast,foreskin reattachment specialist
In that case, ill consider it a SUCCESS so far... Just heard from another "normie" reader today, claimed he read only 2 chapters and complained thats its "self-absorbed"... Well that shows the average mindset of normies.. Its a FRIGGING AUTOBIOGRAPHY!! Of COURSE its self-absorbed!! Its ALL about MY life, and the strange freaky events that ive survived, so its gonna be ABOUT ME! Not about palace intrigue in Moscow, or the romantic life of the average chad, its about me, and the strange folks ive happened to run across... I guess this normie missed the part about it being an AUTOBIOGRAPHY hmm?
I have quite a short attention span nowadays, but I enjoyed it so much that I read it anyway, in small bursts.
 

Lordgoro

IN THE ZONE
Lordgoro said:
In that case, ill consider it a SUCCESS so far... Just heard from another "normie" reader today, claimed he read only 2 chapters and complained thats its "self-absorbed"... Well that shows the average mindset of normies.. Its a FRIGGING AUTOBIOGRAPHY!! Of COURSE its self-absorbed!! Its ALL about MY life, and the strange freaky events that ive survived, so its gonna be ABOUT ME! Not about palace intrigue in Moscow, or the romantic life of the average chad, its about me, and the strange folks ive happened to run across... I guess this normie missed the part about it being an AUTOBIOGRAPHY hmm?
I have quite a short attention span nowadays, but I enjoyed it so much that I read it anyway, in small bursts.
The VERSION thats on this site is formatted for that purpose... My actual writing document, the pages are far longer... But I just transfer them here, in shorter sections, seems to work for here so far...
 

Saint Mentalcel

no hope
So if I was an actual mass murderer, it would be considered a manifesto? And not an autobiography? Interesting
ER's story could've been an autobiography but because he killed, it's seen as a manifesto and people actually take time to read the manifesto to it's entirety or to the last pages. Only because he killed, it would've just been ignored otherwise.
 

Lordgoro

IN THE ZONE
Lordgoro said:
So if I was an actual mass murderer, it would be considered a manifesto? And not an autobiography? Interesting
ER's story could've been an autobiography but because he killed, it's seen as a manifesto and people actually take time to read the manifesto to it's entirety or to the last pages. Only because he killed, it would've just been ignored otherwise.
Thats a SHAME.. Id rather write something closer to a BIBLE for outcast, misfits, incels, and the like... Seems more appropriate to me, and potentially far MORE powerful, then a mere manifesto. Besides, my work is NOT just a story, it is a philosophical reflection and discourse on existence itself!!
 

Saint Mentalcel

no hope
Saint Mentalcel said:
Lordgoro said:
So if I was an actual mass murderer, it would be considered a manifesto? And not an autobiography? Interesting
ER's story could've been an autobiography but because he killed, it's seen as a manifesto and people actually take time to read the manifesto to it's entirety or to the last pages. Only because he killed, it would've just been ignored otherwise.
Thats a SHAME.. Id rather write something closer to a BIBLE for outcast, misfits, incels, and the like... Seems more appropriate to me, and potentially far MORE powerful, then a mere manifesto. Besides, my work is NOT just a story, it is a philosophical reflection and discourse on existence itself!!
Unless you got status and fame or killed anyone, no one would care or take the time to listen to any of our life stories.

The sad reality of it... But, be glad some people will continue to read your story. It would be an actual waste of time if no one chose to read it or would just close it because it's not some SJW political love story crap. I've had enough of those because they are fuсking abysmal to read.
 
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