A few chapters? there are 6 chapters NOW!!! Plenty of pages, trust me..i don't think i want to comment just yet----for fear that it might influence what you write.
i might wait until a few chapters are done, and then comment on those chapters. And even then it would be about what you wrote, not how you wrote/"writting style."
For example, having passed thru Buffalo a few times, i think you can see Buffalo and Toronto simultaneously as you fly over lake ontario? Or am i mistaking Buffalo for St. Catharines? (i think pilot said Buffalo......)
Thank you, I need ALL the encouragement I can GET! Its infinitely difficult writing about 47 years of inceldom and being a misfit across the entire USA, and im doing the best I can with it! I need as much positivity as can be spared from my brothers to continue writing this... Its far harder then I thoughtI find that you convey imagery really well. The elevator part and the 13th floor is written in an illustrative style, and you tend to engage your audience which evokes a sense of dialogue. You have a distinct way of writing that is unconventional yet effective. I am a fan.