I will.. Just taking a short break... more pages coming in a day or 2. Remember, this isnt just a book, its an EPIC, and my lifestory, so its like having a baby, quite painful , stressful, but RELIEVED when its finally OUT! hahaI think you really have talent for storytelling. I have a friend who can make a living writing books, its not much, but he can take care of himself. He always said his main errors as a newcomer were not finishing a book when it got hard, not searching for an agent/publisher early enough and trying to be smart instead of being honest. Hope you keep up the good work!
I can only hope others find it suitably entertainingOK. Your story remembered me at the novel "A Farewell to Arms" from Ernest Hemingway. A bestseller very exciting to read….Lordgoro said:I will try to keep it interesting if I can, but the story is being told properly.. This is JUST the intro to buffalo ny, and what I grew up with...pandabaer6 said:I hope, you will ascend as a rich wrtiter….
I devored especially your first posts impressed and entertained….
For my taste, more little concrete situation and action stories - especially about your fights would make it even more exciting. Your environment
I find it now as entertaining as Hemingway....I can only hope others find it suitably entertainingpandabaer6 said:OK. Your story remembered me at the novel "A Farewell to Arms" from Ernest Hemingway. A bestseller very exciting to read….Lordgoro said:I will try to keep it interesting if I can, but the story is being told properly.. This is JUST the intro to buffalo ny, and what I grew up with...
Thanks... Added a bunch of pages today... The story UNFOLDS in front of me...the reality becomes idea, the IDEA becomes reality digitally... and the story slowly gets toldI find it now as entertaining as Hemingway....Lordgoro said:
I think because you had a long interruption, many who only reacte to you and not quoted you in this thread dont know already that you are now back with extreme entertaining situation an action stuff!
Go on like this.
I did never wanted to critisizse you, but only give you a friendly tip.
I was decades blaming the false people. I developed half in more than a decade as expat in a secular ruled SEA country. And back in a bible theocratic ruled rogue state, I understood, that the theocratic leaders and their puppets in politics and justice are to blame. And not the (still) ovefed and overpaid work and sex lazy foids. And not even sadistic bosses, who are underpaid to discipline a paid maso foid, are also sytstem victims....
If foids are no more overfed and even overpaid for luxury from state and even exmen, they will start again to suck meters of cocks of incels for a bar of chocolate. And if sadists were paid enough to enjoy maso wh'res and fired at last after the first suіcіde of a submitted man, or in wartime delegated to a front duty with a very short overliving time, the incels and emergency sadohomos victims hell already in irdish life would be emptied....